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TU Delft - Motivation Letter for MSc Geomatics for the Built Environment

2 - I would revise this essay to create more of a relationship between my current professional experience and my career...

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Requirements for Germany Scholarship

3 - For the motivational letter, what should I write if have some accomplishments or achievements that are not related to...

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It is better for college students to live in schools than live at home with their parents.

2 - Kindly stay within suggested 300 word limitation for the Task 2 essay to ensure that you will be focusing...

Writing Feedbackscorpions009 - 2 days agoHolt - 20 hrs ago

A culmination of nihilism and existentialism.

2 - The essay was difficult for me to read because of the lack of pauses between the ideas presented. There...

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GKS U 2026 SOP for Business administration + finance

2 - The essay is too creative in presentation. It focused too much on the telling of a story that it...

UndergraduateShubhay07 - Oct 14, 2025Holt - Oct 15, 2025

International Aid - yes or no?

3 - Sounds a good essay, however you have not adhered to simple structure, thesis statement - important (what you have...

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Nigeria and Economic Constraints - Statements of Purpose (S.O.P)

2 - You should not open the statement of purpose with a reference to the thoughts of someone else. The reviewer...

UndergraduateMystro_Dynamic - Oct 13, 2025Holt - Oct 14, 2025

Being Excluded in a project - Waterloo AIF Question #3 - Experience Reflection

2 - The reason why you were sidelined by the group in meetings should be clearly explained in the statement. You...

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Starting a music club at my school - Waterloo AIF question #2 - Community Involvement

2 - This leadership statement is too self focused. There is a lack of teamwork, consideration of the needs of the...

UndergraduatePramodChavali - Oct 12, 2025Holt - Oct 12, 2025

My Passion for Music - Waterloo AIF question #1

2 - The passion aspect is a bit thin in this presentation. It started off on the wrong foot as well....

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Undervalued at a hackathon - Waterloo AIF Question #3 - Experience Reflection

2 - While your story shows how you eventually recovered from being undervalued by your teammates, it took time for you...

UndergraduatePramodChavali - Oct 12, 2025Holt - Oct 12, 2025

Passion for Game Development - Waterloo AIF Question 4 - Goals for Waterloo

3 - Hi Holt, Thank you for your response, and sorry for the late reply, I thought I responded to...

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GKS-U 2026 Personal Statement - Food Science and Food Engineering

3 - Firstly, thank you so much for your valuable advice. And secondly, I apologize for the late reply. ...

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Data analytics - KUAS enrollment essay - Why KUAS ties in with my future goals

2 - The second paragraph does not justify what will make you a good candidate for a student slot at KUAS....

Undergraduateumohon - Oct 11, 2025Holt - Oct 11, 2025

The Sound of His Steps - Common App Essay

2 - Please do not ask me which aspects you should cut from this essay because it is a personal decision...

UndergraduateThienAnhLe - Oct 11, 2025Holt - Oct 11, 2025

It is popular in many parts of the world that young people are doing research on their ancestry

2 - Do not make any reference to age in your restatement as the original prompt did not do this....

Writing Feedbackapolaza - Oct 10, 2025Holt - Oct 11, 2025

VIDEO RECORDS ARE A BETTER WAY TO LEARN ABOUT THE WAY OTHER PEOPLE IN THE WORLD LIVE THAN DOCUMENTS

2 - The prompt restatement is thoroughly incorrect and does not reflect the idea behind the original prompt correctly. There is...

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Scholarship essay for bachelor degree in a German university

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Scholarshipmanifesting - Oct 5, 2025manifesting - Oct 11, 2025

From Bangladesh to the US - personal statement for Hunter College TESOL grad school program

3 - Thank you so much for your suggestions !! Here is the revised version. Personal Statement - Hunter College...

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IELTS WRITING TASK 2 - Essay on unwinding mind with video games or outdoor activity.

2 - The prompt restatement is incorrect. As the writer you are supposed to reframe the original topic, without changing the...

Writing FeedbackfaiqaFARHEEN - Oct 7, 2025Holt - Oct 8, 2025

NATIONAL TAIWAN UNIVERSITY AUTOBIOGRAPHY 'Ten fingers will all have different lengths'

2 - A personal statement should, in my opinion, not be more than 300 words in length. That is because the...

Undergraduatesnowblossoms - Oct 7, 2025Holt - Oct 8, 2025

Younger or Older Leaders in Corporations? IELTS Writing Task 2

2 - There are 2 immediate errors that will fail this essay in terms of preliminary Task Accuracy requirements. The first,...

Writing Feedbackmquan1997 - Oct 7, 2025Holt - Oct 8, 2025

Standing Behind, Seeing Beyond (COMMON APP PERSONAL STATEMENT)

2 - One thing that the applicants always make a mistake with when writing the common app essay is that they...

UndergraduateThienAnhLe - Oct 7, 2025Holt - Oct 8, 2025

7.5 IELTS OVERALL! - IELTS WARRIOR

3 - @mquan1997 I did not remember honestly. But I tried to keep my essay simple, clear and easy for examiners...

Student TalkMr Calma - Oct 6, 2025Mr Calma - Oct 7, 2025

TOPIC: Technology in education

2 - You will not gain any points for this statement because all you did was repeat the writing instructions....

Writing Feedbackquasal - Oct 6, 2025Holt - Oct 6, 2025

Undergraduate dental education in Sudan - Chevening Leadership

2 - You discussed your teaching experience. A teacher is not the same as a leader. Yes, you seem to be...

Scholarshipririavera - Oct 6, 2025Holt - Oct 6, 2025

GLOCAL PROGRAMME - CREATIVE INDUSTRY POLICY AND ECOSYSTEM

2 - The main problem that I see with this essay is that it does not address your educational background. How...

Essaysu_utmaut - Oct 6, 2025Holt - Oct 6, 2025

My Relationship with Glasses - Common App Essay

3 - @Holt Thanks for the feedback! Just one question: When you say to totally skip the pre-k reference, do you...

Undergraduatemathauntie - Oct 5, 2025mathauntie - Oct 5, 2025

Diverse social networks - Chevening Relationship building and influence

2 - Focus on your relationship with iRise Hub. Expand on the background of the meeting. What was the importance of...

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